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Post by Erom Reven on Jul 28, 2007 21:52:48 GMT -5
Name:Tobi (Possibly Uchiha Madara Age:? Village: formerly Konoha Rank:S-Class Jounin (Possibly the real Akatsuki Leader)
Physical Appearance: Tobi is a decently tall guy. His face is obscured by an orange mask with spirals. The mask has a single eye hole, where a Sharingan lies.
Clothing: All black with an Akatsuki robe. The Akakatsuki robe is black with red clouds placed randomly all around the clothing. (ooc: Seriously, these Akatsuki have no fashion sense)
Weapons:?
Personality:On the surface, Tobi is a very polite, energetic person who brings a kind of amusement to the Akatsuki. Underneath the mask, though, lies a serious, arrogant person with a much ruder tounge.
History:?
Jutsu:?
Clan: Uchiha
Clan trait: Sharingan
(NOTE: I'll be working on it as more info on Tobi is revealed. I just wanted dibs on the almighty force that is Tobi and his mask.)
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Post by Tsunade-Sama on Jul 29, 2007 8:33:29 GMT -5
Well...everything is good, but you should describe his clothing a little more. Like for someone who doesn't know what the Akatsuki's robes look like. They won't know that the robes have red clouds on them.
I am new at this so if I offended you please let me now. And if I am not right please inform me of that as well. Other than that I think it is fine, So change that and I will approve him.
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Post by Erom Reven on Jul 29, 2007 8:51:21 GMT -5
Well, it's still a work in progress. If you didn't know, the WIP means it's still in the works. Like I said, I just wanted dibs on his greatness, Lord Tobi.
(and if you don't get my Tobi obsession, I'm part of the Tobi fanclub on Narutofan forums)
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Post by Buriza on Jul 29, 2007 9:20:35 GMT -5
Gonna step in for a bit. I think I might appreciate not going in for 'dibs' but we'll wait for Sakura to get back before we make anything final. Also we can't approve or dissaprove of any 'WIP's until they're done seeing as they're not done and we can't judge something fairly until it's done.
Also please understand that even if you don't finish this char and leave it as a 'wip' it will count towards your character limit. Just thought I'd clear a couple things up.
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Post by Erom Reven on Jul 29, 2007 9:39:30 GMT -5
Yeah, I figured that.
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Post by Sakura on Aug 8, 2007 22:15:29 GMT -5
Its okay Erom. I have faith in your rping :] Also, I know that Tobi is a special case, so he is approved.
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Post by Seimei on Aug 9, 2007 13:38:10 GMT -5
Just for the record. It was never confirmed that the one in the shadows was actually Akatsuki's leader. The current leader of AKATSUKI, which may or may not be a faction of a larger group, is the guy with the Naruto-like apperance. Sorry, i forgot his name.
Note: -Cough- Pein -Cough- Also spelled in the manga as paine -Cough-
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